Saturday, 20 July 2019

Frosty Morning Walk Poems

One morning there was a good frost in Outram and the air was crisp and chilly. The whole field was white with frost. Room 4 went outside (all rugged up in our jackets and hats!) and talked about what we noticed. We saw how the sun sparkled on the grass and how even the leaves were white and icy. We ran around the field and noticed that we made footprints, we shuffled our feet and made train tracks all over the field. When we went back to class, we brainstormed some interesting adjectives to use in our poem writing. Here are some examples of our poetry. 

Frosty Morning Walk
It felt cold
It felt like I was an ice cube
I saw sparkles on the grass
I saw footprints
I heard laughing and talking

By Josh
Frosty Morning Walk
I heard the birds tweeting
I heard crunching
I felt the cold frost on the grass
I saw a volcano coming out of my mouth
I saw footprints

By Riley

Frosty Morning Walk
I saw footprints on the grass
I saw the leaves
I heard crunching
I felt cold on my face and my legs
I felt frozen like a snowman

By Kiana

Frosty Morning Walk
I saw the sun shining on the frost, it twinkled
When I took a breath or said something,
I saw smoke coming out of my mouth
Before we went on the grass
I saw footprints everywhere!
My whole body felt freezing
I heard crunching, birds, tweeting, talking, laughing
And vehicles.

By Teagan

Frosty Morning Walk
I saw frost on the grass
I heard crunching
I felt cold
My toes were cold and my head was cold
I went on the fake grass and it was full of ice
I felt like I was a piece of ice
I saw icy tracks
I was so cold that I wanted to run back inside!

By Oliver

Frosty Morning Walk
I saw frost on the grass
I saw a volcano erupt from my mouth - poof
I heard the crunch of the grass
I heard laughing children - ha ha ha!
I felt cold and shivering
I felt like ice

By Merepeka

Frosty Morning Walk
I heard cars on the road and birds tweeting
We got to make train tracks on the grass
We made foot prints
I heard talking
I saw ice on the grass,
There was lots of ice!
The grass felt like water
The grass was very very cold
All the leaves were covered in ice.

By Nicholas

Frosty Morning Walk
I saw sparkles on the grass
It looked beautiful
I felt cold
I heard crispy noises and crunchy sounds
We made train tracks
It was cool

By Ruby

Frosty Morning Walk
We walked on the icy grass
It was crunchy
There were heaps of sparkles
We made train tracks
We made footprints

By Bella

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